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Rahel Shah

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Glow In the Dark Ceiling Stars

    I like your poem. Your poem gives a serene feeling. from the first paragraph, the second line, the "extracted" word feels a little off for this poem's tone. It would ...

    Nov 22, 2023


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